My friend who live at US, told me about my falses in this posting. And the truth are :

I try to build a good online store of mine. — > I had try (because past time and still continue)

There’s a lot of free cms for online store —> There’re alot of (there is for single, and there are for plural)

I imagine if that picture change with my merchandise store. —> I  imagine if those pictures ( plural not single)

The best is when you move your mouse —>  The best point is when you move your mouse ( what is the best ? )

there will show up the title of posting about it. —> there will be popup the title of posting about it.

really greatest wordpress theme that I ever see.. ! —> really greatest wordpress theme that I’d ever seen.. ! (past tense)

He remind me about to be, single, plural, verb 1 and verb 2. Thankyou very much …

So, here is the complete paragraph :

I’d try to build a good online store of mine. There’re a lot of free cms for online store or e-commerce (by googling), but I can’t find a simple site.

Until I found a greatest theme for wordpress (how could I found free wordpress themes if I was googling free cms e-commerce ? .. hahhaha.. please don’t think about it hardly ..) . Here is that theme. I imagine if those pictures change with my merchandise store. It would be nice looking. The best point is when you move your mouse on the picture there will be pop up the title of posting about it.

image

really greatest wordpress theme that I’d ever seen.. ! you must be not realize if that site  using wordpress engine.. don’t you ? so do I :) .

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