My friend who live at US, told me about my falses in this posting. And the truth are :
I try to build a good online store of mine. — > I had try (because past time and still continue)
There’s a lot of free cms for online store —> There’re alot of (there is for single, and there are for plural)
I imagine if that picture change with my merchandise store. —> IÂ imagine if those pictures ( plural not single)
The best is when you move your mouse —>Â The best point is when you move your mouse ( what is the best ? )
there will show up the title of posting about it. —> there will be popup the title of posting about it.
really greatest wordpress theme that I ever see.. ! —> really greatest wordpress theme that I’d ever seen.. ! (past tense)
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